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Hello there!

I just played the 0.34.3 version, and here are some feedback from my run :

There's not enough event in the morning, especially at the beginning of the game. Most are taking place in the afternoon.

Roxy dress event : Lots of issues in the artwork on her arm, like many belts instead of her gloves. After she drags the MC to her room once done talking with Vicky

Inconsistency in the story. During one of Roxy event, she asks "what could go wrong if we meet our clone", Lizz answers "just a headache". Later, in the main story, when talking about the collapsing words, that if someone can't stay for more than 1 hour if their double exist in the dimension.
Sidney font wrong sized, reason? edit : it's actually explained in a future event, but should probably be explained as soon as meeting her.
Is Osker supposed to be a boy or a girl? Text says He, one line in Azalae events says he shoot semen, but the artwork of him upside down def show breasts.
Act 3 should probably have some better event settings. There's a line about Alex meeting rag in events not mandatory (and actually unsure when she meets rag before the christmas event).
Last roxy event -> Require season meetings, which requires act 3, so "need to graduate" is not accurate (+ old school uniform)
Vapor event 1, MC line "I can't teleport within the same dimension". There were some Emma/Rin events saying "I could have teleported but prefer to walk instead" (around excalibur). I think the Melon/osker saving included same dimension teleport.
Thursday investigation club "FYI your information" ?
Vapor 5th event : clothes suddenly disappear between the animated CG and the "swallow" CG.
Where's the board game club within the school? For clubbing on Monday.
What happened to the little robot from Monroe? It disappeared from the questline
Should the rat trap be for MICHAEL or Jeremy ?
Why is Vapor turning blue ?

Overall it's a pretty nice novel, even if straightforward and little interaction from the player. Lots of references and nice jokes, arts are pretty too.
I haven't finished 100% of the side character, but I'm curious to see future events (especially around Kit/Rin/Emma and Roxy/Agaia)

Cheers

Dussop2 days ago

Okay I'll go through these one by one but there's one or two that I don't really understand what you mean by and you'll have to elaborate on.
1: Fair enough, I kinda expect most people to fish in the morning especially in act 1, but you still have Nate and Azalea events to do mostly in the morning.

2: I don't really understand what you mean, that outfit has belts on the arm, that's the design. If you look at how Queen roxy is dressed in the Eldrite main quest that's just what she looks like, I think it's cool.

3: Lizz is purposefully being obtuse, that's part of her personality, you get a headache and then you kinda have a brain bleed and die after an hour.

4: I thought it was pretty self explanatory that she was just very quiet, I thought I explained in the prose when you meet her but maybe I forgot.

5: Osker is a man, he does not have boobs lmao, the character models are just a little fucky because at the time of making him specifically, if I made his chest any smaller his shirt would clip, but I have a way to fix that now so when I update his model again that'll be solved, but I'm not gonna go back and change those renders.

6: I don't know what you mean by event settings

7: I don't understand what you mean by this one either

8: Yeah that vapor event line is correct, he can't, if he wants to teleport within the same dimension he needs to leave and go to another one as a pitstop, I've been pretty consistent with that, like in that one Alex event where he takes a pitstop to the observatory.

9: It's a joke.

10: I will look into this one

11: It's explained in the story that there is no board game club yet, it hasn't started yet and it will be future content.

12: That's... well that's part of the story I can't really give spoilers, but there's a reason why he hasn't been mentioned since, I think it's possible to pick up on what happened to Spiz if you pay close enough attention to the story.

13: Why would it be michael? I'm pretty sure Vapor just calls it Jeremy idk where you got—oh. You didn't understand the reference in the item description when you bought the rat trap LMAO, it's a reference to an old Jerma985 bit

14: I feel like this is explained in her events

Thank you for playing the game, hopefully this clears some things up for you!

Stratezo2 days ago

Roxy scene inconsistency. If the belt are on purpose, then the "no belts" one are the issues :

Osker picture I was refering to, which ain't really "male chested" :

About the "event settings", I meant the "minimum requirements" to see the next event. The event 11 from Roxy requires the act 3 to be done. But among the first line of the event, it says something about classes, which doesnt match the act 3 :

I'm haven't found back when Alex is referencing to rag, but its somewhere along the main events, when it's possible to achieve it before alex actually meet her.

For the others, I might have not paid attention enough, and yeah def not have the reference to Jerma985 haha.

Thanks for taking the time to answer !

Dussop2 days ago

Oh i didn't even notice the sprite discrepancy, I'll try to fix that when i get a chance but I'm not sure I can replicate the same renders perfectly since i reinstalled the program recently lmao.

I'll look into that Roxy event logic mishap too.

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