Cool vibe, I like the very traditional approach its a pretty nice arrangement you went to different place and did not stay at a fixed point in time doing the same thing over and over which I appreciate. Now you've talked about the mix that you are pretty new, that's fine we're all here to learn. If you listen carefully it was the first thing for me, instrument at 0:53 very high pitch, it comes back a lot, this frequency is very annoying, get an EQ find that frequency and put it down until its not aggressive to your ears anymore. Pannnnning ! I feel the track is mostly in the center, you have room to pan a little left and right some isntrument to create more widness in the mix and leave space to other instruments. Good job !