WOAH, A SUPERNATURAL MYSTERY ON A TRAIN WITH NO SAFE WAY HOME?! πππ
I really like the premise of No Final Destination! A routine train journey turning into a nightmare, with the engineer missing and strange deaths happening among the passengers, is a fantastic setup for a mystery. The pixel art gives it a distinct atmosphere, and the conversations make me curious about the characters, their secrets, and what is actually happening on that train. It feels like there's a much bigger story waiting to unfold! π©Έπ
It's a shame the full experience couldn't come together for the jam, but building such a complex system in around 50 hours is an ambitious challenge. Showing character names during dialogue would also make it easier to follow who's speaking and get more invested in the mystery. I'd genuinely love to see how the story develops if you decide to continue working on it!
THE JOURNEY MAY BE INCOMPLETE, BUT THE POTENTIAL IS DEFINITELY THERE! πβ¨ I hope you're doing better after the health challenges, and you should be proud of what you've learned and built during the jam. Wishing you all the best, EmperorZoldyck! ππ