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I think this is an immensely beautiful and interesting game. You did a very good job, and your film sensibilities show. Particularly love the writing in this.

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Thank you so much for taking the time to comment, I'm so happy to hear that the project resonated with you.'Immensely beautiful and interesting' is truly the highest compliment!

I'm really touched that you enjoyed the writing, it gave me so much grief (ironically). With a film, it's far easier to convey human emotion and complexity obviously, because you have humans interacting organically as your 'tools'. (Must be said, I spent a fair chunk of my career after film producing and performing in porn, so the acting was always terrible anyway lol definitely no human complexity there)

With games, you need to convey the same complexity and depth with (in this style anyway) some very brief passages of text, a few polygons and general vibes. The player, largely, fills in the blanks.

So when building this game, I just wasn't sure if the message would ever get through to players. Not because they couldn't understand it, but because I couldn't communicate it in a two-line text box. Maybe it would just feel a bit incomprehensible and gibberish y'know?

It makes me so happy that it has gotten through, and players like yourself have really resonated with the game and enjoyed it! 


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The message did come out very well, and you nailed the feel quite a bit. I think the background score has to do a lot with this. You did a great job on the soundscape! Would you like to do the soundtrack for one of my game jam projects?

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Thank you very much! I'm a far better musician (4/10 on a good day lol) than I am game designer, so it made sense to lean on the OST.

I'd absolutely love to help with your project, but unfortunately I just don't think I'm going to have the time to devote to it. Too many irons in the fire right now, and I think I'd probably end up not giving it the attention it deserves which is a bit unfair to you. Thanks for asking though, that is much appreciated!

I totally understand! I’d love to work with you in the future if time ever permits.