I was checking back and saw my comment never got posted, I must have forgotten to press 'post comment'. Delighted to see you've had a few people comment and give you some feedback, and it was also a pleasure to watch your game on stream too.
The background ambience certainly adds an edge to a spooky feel. I loved Vera's design and agree there are some lovely backgrounds in this project. I would recommend folks do play around with a few options as some are more complete than others.
Writing for games demands a lot of time, planning and energy! Hope you can continue to enjoy game jams and give Spooktober another go next year! I would recommend considering to avoid too many heavy paragraphs at once which can slow down the pacing of your game. You could try to create a spooky linear game if there is no much writing time!
All the best!
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Thalasso's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Category: Voice Acting | #221 | 1.778 | 1.778 |
| Category: Music | #259 | 2.667 | 2.667 |
| Visuals | #261 | 3.111 | 3.111 |
| Story | #330 | 2.556 | 2.556 |
| Category: Cinematography | #333 | 2.111 | 2.111 |
| Overall Experience | #336 | 2.556 | 2.556 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Content Warnings
murder, drowning
Log Line
The past calls out to you, but as you return, will you find love? Or fear?
Team Credits & Cast
Credits to be added to game
Work Start Date
September 2nd
Which engines and/or plugins did you use? (NaniNovel, Light.VN, etc.)
Ren'py
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