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azx7809, this is the note I wanted and least expected, so thank you for being plain instead of polite. Two things I'm taking from it.


The name field. You typed 123 because it looked like a placeholder, so the one act the whole piece hangs on got skipped. That is not you missing the point. That is the piece failing to signal it. A field that wants a real person's name should read as a person, not a form. I'm fixing the wording.


The abstraction. The vague middle is on purpose, the sentence at the door is the only thing that loads, but on purpose is not a defence if it costs you the point. If you spent the whole run guessing at intent, the style became a tax. That's on the piece too.


So: tough read, exact read, more useful than a vote. I know what to change because you said it plainly.