I like that you're revisiting the opening to make the world easier to understand without dumping too much lore on new players. The premise itself is fascinating, especially the idea of powerful elites trying to combine AI, nanotechnology and necromancy to create a workforce that can't escape even through death.
with Ash's personal struggle to provide for her younger brother sitting alongside such a much bigger dystopian conflict, how do you balance those personal moments with the wider worldbuilding without overwhelming players early on?