Thank you so much for such detailed feedback! I really appreciate the time you took to write all of this. ❤️ The development was quite a bumpy ride, and I had no detailed plan from the start, just the story idea.
Although the page says I uploaded it 5 days before the deadline, that was just the initial page with two images and a couple of lines. The final version was uploaded only a few hours before the deadline! Since time was limited and 2D art isn't my strong point, I decided to use my own photos and edit them in GIMP. It was a lot of work, especially since some photos were taken with my phone's timer while I tried to get myself into the frame. 😂 I wanted a much longer story, but once I started putting the images and story together, I realized I had less than 5 hours left, so the writing, grammar and fonts became a bit of a last-minute sacrifice. English isn't my native language, and I wanted to write everything myself without relying on automatic translation tools. I'm just happy I managed to create the spooky atmosphere I was aiming for! And a little fun fact: the creepy breathing at the beginning is actually mine, recorded while I had a cold. I just made it sound a bit weirder and did some light editing in Audacity. The headset is a real prop I built in my garage from old stuff and electronic parts, while that evil eye actually started as a photo of a... rotten tomato. 😂🍅
After the voting period, I might work on a more complete version, maybe with some extra images. Thanks again for the lovely feedback, and good luck with your own projects and your YouTube channel! 😊