It was really cool how the camera sways right from the title screen. The camera work made me feel like I was stepping directly into the story, which was fantastic.
The music was great as well.
My only critique would be the scene where the pumpkin rolls—it felt like either it needed more speed/momentum, or the timing window was a bit too strict. Having tried and failed a few times, most players might get frustrated and give up.
I did reach the title screen again around the final slope, so I believe I was able to complete one run-through. However, I didn't feel much motivation to attempt a second run.
That being said, the overall concept was extremely creative and really well done!