You really thought of everything...
Its all correct, the balancing, pacing, that sun card that's unreadable T^T (i already fixed and updated the cards and will put out a patch after the Jam!)
Ill also have time to add more content to hopefully remove the pacing issue. And your idea of having a timer actually has so much great potential! Im already thinking of the ways it could add to the story how you'll feel like you ruined an opportunity to e.g. go outside before night sets if you take to long overthinking it-
And I'm already planning on fixing the dialogue too. I am still figuring it out but i want to remove any repetitive text that overwrites written dialogue for the event you chose, because thats a waste!
And regarding all other things you said, i really appreciate it and will take it with me on my journey-
You're amazing at writing good feedback and reviews and deserve praise for that. It'll help me but also yourself, and just the dedication you put into really trying someone else's game is very nice.
Much love and I'd love to see what else you come up with in the future too!<3