This is a really good game but I had to stop when I reached the house where you have to get the photo, as I was unable to move at all using the WASD keys. Not sure if anyone else had this issue, but it kind of ruined it for me so I had to close the game.
Just finished playing it now, I loved it! :) Brilliant storyline and very responsive controls too.
The only thing which was pulling me out of the immersion though, was the text-to-speech audio which sounded too robotic. I think the impact of your game would hit a harder with some more human-like audio :) and maybe using something like this would give you some better results? https://www.naturalreaders.com but that's just a minor thing. Other than that though, I think you have a great game there overall, well done man! :D
I'm definitely a fan and I'm looking forward to seeing your future projects!