Hi ! Just wanted to be a bit nosy (respectfully with a lot of love for you and anon) and maybe give another opinion / interpretation as reader too !
I'm big blane lover and just wanted to tell you that even though I do understand how those lines could be interpreted they're not THAT weird context wise ? Actually pretty typical and could be said in real life with similar context jokingly without any ill intent.
It's just some kind of social understanding with people you hate/like/feel attracted too but can figure them out because of their behaviour or just as a fact ? And obviously you can change it if you really feel like it but it could lend to a material for a future conversation/discussion on how we view them and how they view us ?
Those comments could be used and Blane could comment on it themself — even if Blane is apothisexual, we (as mc) can express attraction/be attracted to them nonetheless (and attraction doesn't mean something sexual it's just a feeling you sometimes can't quite understand yourself ? Can't blame someone for seeing someone as hot even if their personality is not lol) and it could be a good way to be able to talk about it too, educate mc on what they hate, their boundaries etc etc.
Also ! I didn't view the description in this way, it was more of a paracentral view (and I know description can be hard to write that's why sometimes the description can be a little weird) but I viewed it just as the first thing in front of mc when they looked at them ! Anyway a VERY LONG message just to tell you that actually everything can be interpreted to a different glances... yeah maybe writing differently could help but also don't forget why you wrote it in the first place ? Why did the MC said that ? That's what matters ! <33
Enjoy your story/writing it's yours first. And your game really helped this spring/summer and when I was totally reticent to start this new kind of game (visual novel lovers first) I was totally hooked by the story, your characters, the game dynamics and everything playing everything routes was everything to me (K and Blane my babies with N. as bias wrecker ahahah) sorry for the big wall ! love you <333