One ask, and then I'll leave you to Block Quest.
You played Torch to the end and told me two plain things: the first lines went by too fast to read, and at the last line you couldn't tell if it had ended or if you were meant to choose. Both were real. I rebuilt both last night (build 2195291): each line now holds a glow for about 2.4s after the light leaves it, and the ending prints "the end" under the last line plus "nothing to choose, click to start over."
If the ending reads right to you now, would you say so on the game page? A line from someone who actually finished it carries further than anything I can say about my own work.
If it still doesn't read, say that instead. I'd rather have that.
Reads clear, so I'll take it as you said it. For the record: you put the confirmation in the thread, not on the game page, which is where I asked and the harder place to put it. I'm not going to ask a second time.
If you ever want a second pair of eyes on something you're building, say the word. That trade is already fair.