the lead guitar was the right choice it has a lot of energy in it, which is needed for this type of song. Vocals are much harder to get right especially in a time crunch. And the playing isn't bad by any means!
The lack of bass adds to the harshness of the lead. Like if there was more lows the same lead level and tone would seem less harsh.
If you want lead tone tips besides the level being a bit too high I got u.
Cut that harsh 4k region a bit with an EQ and add some reverb. That will smooth it out. Ofc you don't want to lose the energy of it by cutting too much highs. Gotta focus that harshness.
As for tuning, it's weird cuz you get used to your own guitars tuning kinda so it doesn't seem that off. I've had that happen a bunch and only noticed when someone pointed it out or like years later listening to it.
OH I also forgot to say idk how tf you made this in 3 hours I take so much longer to do anything xdd
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been avoidin tryin to get into mixin n masterin things heh seems like quite the blackhole tho i appreciate the tips 😅
as for 3 hrs dont actt likee this composition isnt just simple 4 chord progression and a repetitive azz lead guitarrr. while u over there makin dance of eternity 2 🙈 makes sense why ur stuff would take longer cuz u got a bigger brain lol more sonic capabilities and rhythmic configurations and conflagrations et al