I did not expect such a well done intro right away! And wow, the UI was incredible. I loved the whole notebook aesthetic and that you could actually follow the notes and everything while you played, it really helped keeping track of everything. Also the animations and way you moved around all the sprites was also super great!
I didn't think the UI and rest of the art clashed but I do think the story would've been a lot harder to follow WITHOUT the notes. So again, smart move to include it!
All of you on the team really put together a solid and wonderful looking entry. Nice work!