SPOILER WARNING:
KEVIN NOOO !! My bad haha what a twist!
The writing is fantastic. This is the first Twine game I've played and I really enjoyed it! It felt like one of those old 'choose your destiny' books that had me flipping back and forth to find the right page. I loved it! The sound effects were a nice addition too. They really helped immerse you in the scene. Overall, brilliant entry. Well done :)