Don't panic, I still love your game !
I didn't make it past the first monster either but I love the concept, the gameplay works, the atmosphere is well made... There are many good things in your game, and balancing difficulty / level construction is super hard especially in such a short time.
Btw I'll upload an updated version of my game in a few minutes. I'm to tired to complete the narrative part today, but I tried to follow your advice and also took time to write a short tutorial. Thanks again for your feedback, it helps !