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I think the graphics are great and it's a good concept, I think you can take this way further and have a full visual shop, different types of paper for the letters, different visual cues for the dialogs or audio cues. I think also the ui could use some tweaking so many times there was like overlaying text that was competing with each other I didn't always know exactly what I should be looking at. 

I wanna edit this by saying, I usually take my reviews/ ratings seriously as opportunities to find flaws. So sometimes I might come across as nitpicky or something- but I think these jams are an opportunity to everyone including myself to make better and better things. I am specifically editing this comment cause I wanna say I really genuinely loved your vision here and look forward to seeing what you make in the future. 

really appreciate you giving me specific pointers on what should be worked on! thanks for taking ur time to try this!

indeed having different visual cues could definitely help, i will take that into account for sure. thank you once again!