I'm going to start this off by saying I'm not a very big fan of visual novels, so take my review with a grain of salt. I'm not sure if this is standard for renpy games, but I would have loved to see more areas of the neighborhood, some minigames, or maybe just more art of Jacquie. I think you have a nice aesthetic and a cute character but I feel like it maybe the player needs more of a reason to ask her the 13 questions other than to just send her away. I would love to see you continue either working on this/making more games because I believe you are a good writer and just need it supported by other engaging aspects.