At this point it may seem unnecessary to say but genuinely the artstyle is super charming and eerie in all the right ways. I also find the tone of the story and the world very fitting for the vibe created by the aesthetic, I really do genuinely think if you were to take the time to flesh this out into a full title and polish up the writing, this would do really really well in some circles. Only real note I have which is probably just a byproduct of time constraints, is that it took me a minute into the game to realize everywhere was walkable, and its hard to gauge where the transition points between rooms are. Other than that it this was a great submission! - Cole