This is good! Though, the placement of the skip button makes me think I am just advancing dialogue one bubble, when in fact I am losing all of it. And sound is distinctly missing.
In case it helps with getting structured feedback - I'm building Betacade, which shows how people actually play a web game: who played, how far they got, where they quit, and what they said. Might help: betacade.com
I'm happy to walk yu through it and help however I can. I'm a software engineer by trade so pretty good at smoothing out bumps.
Matt