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Amazing. The game is running smoothly. But oh boy! What a game. My head is spinning!

The first case was a bit overwhelming. I had to go through all the clues 3 times before it finally clicked, and my deduction was right!

I admired your clean, easy-to-navigate UI because it made the deduction easy and pleasant. I can easily juggle between rooms, people, evidence, etc.

For me, working with a mostly text-based game was hard. Maybe I would have appreciated more visuals to help me understand the case. Even simple illustrations like those in Machinarium would have helped a lot. But maybe that was a design choice on your part. So don't take my opinions as real evidence until more players confirm it! 

The case itself was ok. There wasn't much of a story behind it. 

In the second case, I gave up because of the case multipliers: more rooms, more suspects; it's too much for my brain in one session. lol!

Overall, a lovely game. good job

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I hope this was helpful. And thank you in advance. Here is my game

https://sardira.itch.io/cell-cleanup

Hi, this is such a wonderful feedback, thank you for taking time to play the game and write it) I have played your short prototype and left a feedback  in an in-game form but will  put it here as well:

"It is a little simple and repetitive like you just need to move and eat. if it was a little more difficult and diverse in something then it would be much more fascinating.

i especially liked how you eat bacteria it literally grabs them into itself and absorbs. That is nicely done. And the idea of being in an organism and working as a macrophage is also rearely seen so it is nice.

Maybe make environment more realistic and atmospheric too.

For a first short prototype this is very good. Like, very good.

Seriously.

Oh? one more thing: tutorial and assistance in game is such a nice thing. And it is well done. Thank you"

I’m curious, what finally made the first case click for you? Was there one clue that changed how you saw it, or did the pieces come together after rereading?

Thank you so much for the feedback. I got the email as well. And it is super helpful. You rock! What made it tick was the rain clue under the window. First, I suspected one of them was a theft. But when I saw the rain marks and the instructions in the procedure for rain, it all made sense. It was meant to save it after it got wet. 

Glad my feedback was useful! Thanks for your clarification)