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https://chesskingmaster.com/

Firstly, please use descriptions about your link before posting. I had no idea what the link was and most people won't click.




The site contains way too much marketing for a puzzle game, especially to make a account. The main menus are extremely confusing, and mostly all market making a account. To make it worse, a single wrong click can lock the site up, trap you in account creation, or wipe progress. There are also 3 different ways you market this account, including "ads" and alerts that show a blank screen, wiping guest progress.


At the very least, remove the notification bell, the extra step for guest creation, and the ad after the first puzzle. Also add device saving, and basic stats. There should be no in-game ads for account creation.


For puzzles, the first puzzle is difficult to start. However, most of the following puzzles use the same mechanics over and over, breaking user engagement. I personally left after the 4th puzzle, due to a account request that resulted in a empty page. The tutorial is also too long.


Some suggestions to get people to make accounts are:


Extra in-game currency.


Showing that you can access save data from multiple devices.


Having just 1 area that shows account benefits and a proper login screen.




I played all of this on mobile.


Feedback Exhange.


I have a sokoban puzzle game, playable in the browser. 


https://codergenius72.itch.io/dualspace

checked it out! got 7 out of 8 king moves on the first puzzle and then got stuck lol

took me a sec to get that it's not normal chess, the name made me expect a regular game vs a bot. once it clicked it's a really neat idea, clearing a path for the king on a 3x3 is a fun little brain teaser. the jewel pieces look great and moves feel snappy.

few things:

- the landing page has a LOT going on (account, VIP, ranks, daily, community). I'd lead with just "play" + a one line "this isn't regular chess" pitch

- the rule that pieces have to alternate wasn't obvious to me until the long tutorial. maybe show it right in the first puzzle

- on desktop the board feels small with tons of empty space around it

nice job overall!

mine if you want to swap: DNA EVOLUTION

https://elysianx138.itch.io/dna-evolution

free in browser, mutate creatures and push the enemy lab on 3 lanes 🙏