I like that you went in on the intro, adding some narrative really helps a lot, and I can appreciate that you were trying to be funny, but some of the speech was inaudible (maybe some subtitles would help?) Also it would be nice if the game had music
The actual game i'm sorry to say is very hard to look at, Im really not sure why you would choose textures that induce headaches.
Also nothing at all happens / I cant do anything. It mentions the ability to shoot etc but I found myself stuck in a room with some roblox looking guys and that was it, i couldnt shoot i could just roll around to see there were no doors or interactable objects at all.