I love the effects and the atmosphere you created with this game. The addition of images and humor both worked really well. I am not sure if its an issue on my end or if it was written this way, but opening the second bottle seems like its going to lead somewhere and then doesnt. This could be fixed.

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I love the effects and the atmosphere you created with this game. The addition of images and humor both worked really well. I am not sure if its an issue on my end or if it was written this way, but opening the second bottle seems like its going to lead somewhere and then doesnt. This could be fixed.
Thius game made me laughg, i liked the Rick and Morty riff and the idea of going into different games. There were plenty of choices and great dialogue. My only complaint about the looping aspect is being sent all the way back to the beggining if you mess up. Having various games and having the loop restart at the start of each one respectivly may make more sense. overall very good.
The story of your game is good, its easy to follow and easy to understand the consequenses of my choices. There are some gramatical things that could be fixed, such as changing POV (eg: "you walk down the hall...." straight into "what should i do?") this conflict takes me out of the atmosphere. The endings were also quite abrupt, and more choices may help.
it took us a minute and round of trial and error to fully understand the rules and goals. They could have been written more clearly, but overall it was a fun game. I think there could have been some way to switch up the turn order, because if you go second you’re at a bit of a disadvantage compared to the last player who already knows what everyone else has said. You could also wait to reveal until after everyone has placed a card or something. It all worked well and was fun though!
the rank list of poker hands could be clearer as I thought I was moving TOWARDS 10, not away, so an arrow might be helpful. Also, some of the rules could be condensed for what they are I think. The amount of information was a little overwhelming at the start. The poker hands were hard to remember but the sheet was helpful. I don’t think the sheet of paper to write your predictions is required, you could just say your prediction out loud before flipping to save on a resource. Otherwise, really fun game! With a little polishing it could be really great.
