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Understood. There's always next year!

Aw, dang. Was I in the running?

This definitely feels like a Cyberpunk adventure. Approved!

This was a fun read! I kind of want to adapt it for Cyberpunk.

(You have a typo on page three in the Healing Potion box, "became of the thief" is repeated.)

Couple thoughts on first read- maybe do 2d3 villagers at start instead of 1d6.

When I'm assigning X villagers to a task and roll xd6, do I get all results? The best?

Are the Ongoing events all the 2X events in the middle?

This is very compelling I love the layout. 'Return to the old ways' puts a nice dark spin on things. It's great!

Thank you! Mechanically it's sound but is likely very unbalanced.

I definitely was going for a roll-and-write on the back of the movie tie-in cereal box vibe.

Thank you! I need to add a little more to polish it.

I realized after submission that I forgot to include the end space! I expect to add a little more once the judging window closes.  Glad you like the theme!

I like the map and the weirdness of various wrongly-sized critters.

'WARE THE MOONFANG! A white serpent, that has survived countless attempts to kill it, because it possesses uncanny intelligence. Everyone knows it can command storms with the changing of the seasons. 

That was a nice diversion. I think some of the tables need to be longer lest you run out of names.

You definitely want to optimize your PDF. It went from 27MB to 2.8 for me.

If you'll pardon the pun, this is dripping with theme. I like the layout but would be nice to have a print-friendly version!

I see what you mean now. The way it was written, it sounded like there was a stat I overlooked. Like Status="Happy" or Status="High Class" or something to that effect.

Can you clarify what is meant by step 3, "set your caravan status" ?

Thanks! I was very confused on page 3.

Where in the the Player Kit is the cheat sheet to summarize the game flow?

I fondly remember Psi*Run the Pursuit from the Google Plus days!

Closer than you think.

This looks great!

That font is giving me 80s Stephen King vibes.

This sounds really neat but I am having a hard time envisioning how to play. Are we supposed to cut out the holes in the bookmark to reveal words?

This looks cool!

Thank you! I think including E might work out for a d4, but it feels elegant to just reroll and move on.

Does it read clearly how to generate a d20 off two rolls? I think all the rest of the polyhedra could be faked as well, but that can be an exercise for the reader.

Very cool! I just started a short campaign with some friends and shared it.

How long does it take to play? That is, how many exchanges does the game typically last?

That's awesome!

Deep Nap and Deep Sleep don't stack. Seems like they should.

Maybe a key would be helpful? Or lean into it a bit more and put similar things near each other?

What do the colors mean?

First round I played, my very first roll was a 1. Alas!

That's awesome! When I was playtesting, I used a small handful of dice, say 7-10, just to work out how they could fit together. But use whatever size derelict you need!

Is there a way to get physical copies of this after the crowdfunding?

That's utterly fantastic! Please let me know what you come up with, I'd love to hear how it works for your table. :)

Very cool!

Will there be more physical copies?

Hey David! I think there's a typo in the Detriments table on p20 of the players' guide- Major Detriment option 4 says "-1 Talent" but on p32 of Lone Eons it says "-1 Trait" and it's rather confusing. Can you clarify?

Hi there! I am down to have these set of oracles included, thank you very much! This particular one is currently unfinished. What kind of deadline are you working with?

Huzzah! Thanks!

Is there any way to get a physical copy?