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A jam submission

Fall of the First PretenderView project page

Submitted by rossum (@mischakrilov)
Rated by 14 people so far
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Host

I think this is super creative and I like the mechanics you've come up with a lot. Unfortunately, this falls a bit too far outside the realm of being an adventure module. I apologize, but I'm going to disqualify it from audience pick.

Developer

Aw, dang. Was I in the running?

Host(+1)

honestly, not sure, just a matter of principle 

Developer

Understood. There's always next year!

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

I like the little story (naming the three little runners is such a neat idea!) And the dice-mechanic, but I seem to miss a page of instructions :-/

Submitted(+1)

Different take on the jam than I've seen so far, cool you got a mechanic/system developed in the space and time available. I think with some more fleshing out this could be really cool and helpful to a GM looking to switch things up for a session, maybe even as an in-world game the characters know and love to play at the tavern. That crime boss will help us, but only if you can beat him at a game of Fall of the First Pretender. Anyways,interesting stuff! 

Submitted (2 edits) (+1)

This seems half-finished. I was not sure what the start conditions for the players in the maze is, and where the win condition occurs. I really like the 4d6 (drop 1) forced dice placement mechanic, but I just need more detail about the system around that system.

Even with as little writing as there is, the theming is very strong! Clearly we are peeking in at the height of a maze culture's signature maze politics.

Developer

I realized after submission that I forgot to include the end space! I expect to add a little more once the judging window closes.  Glad you like the theme!

Submitted(+1)

Quick read and cool concept.

Developer

Thank you! I need to add a little more to polish it.

Submitted(+1)

Fun. Heavier on the boardgame side than most. But, I think this could be a fun dungeon. 

Developer(+1)

I definitely was going for a roll-and-write on the back of the movie tie-in cereal box vibe.

Submitted(+1)

This was a mechanically weird and fun entry. Nice stuff!

Developer

Thank you! Mechanically it's sound but is likely very unbalanced.