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There's so much packed into these two pages. I am very impressed you made it all fit. These are all super flavorful, and I'm a big fan. I really would love to test this out and see how it plays. I can see a certain type of player absolutely loving this and diving into it. 

Yeah... I completely misinterpreted the theme and thought it was just a make whatever you want. Very obvious now, but oh well. I had fun with it!

Oh, I'm more amazed you got it all into 1 page! I couldn't even get all mine into two. It's a beautiful 2nd page. 

Hey, I completely thought the 1 yr theme just meant do whatever you want. So I'm right there with ya. 

Going for damage is fine! I think there's some cool stuff you could've mixed in to give it a bit more options. Like it's silly, but things like the "brown note". There's weird stuff sound can do to you.

This is a very unique and cool idea. The idea of the Nathari taking the abilities and traits from their home is great. It's a little weird for the Draw Steel Nathari to be our "rival", but I get the goal of it. I like how the different abilities all reference adventures that have been released.

I really like this one. I like that it gives ways for both Directors or players to incorporate this into the their game. I like how the bonds suggest ones that would be good for different classes, types of players, and backstories. There's so many things that you could do with this, and I'm already thinking of fun additional bonds. 

I would like to see a bit more from the Mirror Blade. Gaining surges doesn't do a whole lot. The Disruption Field Nucleator is really cool. That is a fun consumable that I would love to have as a player. Not really on theme though.

The layout for this is beautiful! Even though the 2nd page is blank of content, it's a nice touch. I also really enjoy the little flair text at the start of the Domain. This seems pretty dang powerful, and I would expect to have to make  tweaks to allow this in my game. Names of abilities are A++. Very well done!

Good Layout with unique styling. This doesn't really fit the theme. I like the ability names, such as Bang! or Howlback. The tradition has a large focus on damage, but I think there's some interesting things that could've been done to make the sound/vibrations have other unique effects.