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Thank you for the kind words and the feedback, I hope your player has fun!

For summer’s canticle, I wanted to get across the dual idea of the summer sun able to be warm and nourishing or unforgivably hot. Your comment made me think of new ways to give it a support feature without it being temp Stamina, which will definitely go into the next edit!

I love the strange guests table. This whole idea is so fun and flavorful, a really minor but nice addition to a campaign where the heroes might enjoy relaxing after big adventures. Great work!

I'd like a little more definition and rules regarding the level of the Feast Hall.

This guy is an absolute beast. I really want to run this for a group and test it out. Such cool flavor, such powerful abilities. I ran a campaign that never finished where something like this would have been the final boss. I may revisit that adventure and use this!

I also submitted with seasons as a theme! I love the art, I love the writing and the abilities, these monsters seem really fun to run. Great work!

The writing on this was so fun. Really fun, interesting prompts. I would be very interested to see what kind of campaign would utilize these sort of mechanics. I loved Save the World!

Layout is clean, if a little boring. I kinda want to see a whole adventure built around this concept!

These are really creative ideas, and really interesting statblocks! I want to test them, they sound super neat to run!

I think this could have used another editing pass to clean up language in the fiction and statblocks. Layout looks really clean!

Thank you for all the kind words! All of this feedback is super valuable, and I will definitely make the edits to the keywords once the voting period ends :)

Also, the layout compliments mean so much. I am not a graphic designer and had to learn how to make all of these elements from scratch. I'm really glad it's being received so positively!

A global effect is an interesting idea, and a unique challenge to design for. Definitely will keep that in mind for the future!

Thank you for the kind words regarding the layout! I am no graphic designer, I had to learn how to make all this layout from scratch, so that compliment means so much. I used Affinity for the layout using some templates from DriveThruRPG, some gradients and texture brushes for the page aging. For the borders elements, I created some overlapping shapes in the Affinity vector studio, created a brush with that element, and used the pen tool with that brush selected to trace along the outside. Here's a video I used to get me like 90% of the way there, though the way I created the initial shape was different.

Thank you, that's very kind!

good catch, that requires an edit!