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Thanks for taking time to check it out. Sorry it wasn't very good, it was my first try at vn type game and my first game jam so there is a lot of room for improvements. But appreciate your comments never the less!

Oh no I didn't think it was harsh at all! I prefer people leave comments then play and not say anything cause then I can't learn from the experience. For my next idea, it is probably too ambitious for my skill level at the moment but my dream is to make like an RPG kind of like Dave the Diver. I love that game and the humor was right up my alley not to mention all the fun mini games to make each mechanic very unique and interesting. So I might just start practicing making small mini games to learn to develop the skills then maybe build something bigger when I feel more confident 🤔

Thank you for a very thoughtful message. I agreed with all of your points and while I was working on it I had the same thoughts. I come from more of a coding background so admittedly am pretty weak in the writing area, which is why I chose to use existing story instead of coming up with my own haha. I do want to take some writing courses and get better at it and hopefully I can make future games more compelling. I will go back and fix some smaller issues you and the other commenter left after the jam but because it was a learning experience for me and I have others ideas that I am excited to build I think I will leave it the way it is story structure wise. I took note about diverging storylines coming together too quickly and characters being a bit flat because I do think that will make the game more interesting since it is hinged on the story since it's a VN lol. Again thank you for taking your time to play and your feedback will definitely help make me become a better developer for my future projects! 

Thank you for playing! I was having trouble with fonts and stuff and ran out of time to fix it but will definitely see how to adjust it after all the game jam is done :)