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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Art: how well does the art support the other content? | #25 | 4.529 | 4.529 |
| Overall | #29 | 4.247 | 4.247 |
| Theme: how well would the module have fit into the Appendix N? | #30 | 4.471 | 4.471 |
| Writing: how clear and/or interesting is the writing? | #32 | 4.235 | 4.235 |
| Layout: how easy is it to find all the presented information? | #34 | 4.294 | 4.294 |
| Playability: how easy would it be to run this module? | #79 | 3.706 | 3.706 |
Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This is fantastic, I love the map and the setup. Layout is great too and makes excellent use of the space.
Thank you!
This is an adventure that perfectly captures the science-fantasy spirit of Appendix N, feeling like a story straight from Leigh Brackett. The writing is clear and evocative, establishing a great central mystery with the doppelgänger wizards, Malundro and Ordnulam. The layout is clean and highly usable; the pointcrawl map of Umbriel is easy to read, and all the necessary information is presented clearly. The art is also effective, adding to the module's old-school, astronomical feel. Bravo!
Wow! That is some mighty praise. Thank you so much. You made my day.
I love the double spread map, fantastic work!
Thanks dude!
Lots of cool science fantasy flavor. Good premise. Fine artwork. I dig the imagery including a diamond as a prosthetic eye and primates with nodules growing on them.
Thank you
I like that you have presented multiple ways to frame and run this adventure.
Thank you. I figured if it's small, it might as well have some options.
5 star mod. Very cool NPCs and factions. Wonderful setting. Excellent layout art and color choice.
Well do e.
Thank you very much!
A fantastic adventure with sympathetic factions, all with real aggrievements, and workable solutions. Well done!
I’m especially a fan of the wonderfully keyed map, with the exact right blend of old school charm. Malerie Dash Saturday morning cartoon series when?
Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate the shout out on Bsky as well. I'm not gonna lie, I got a real feeling for a Malerie Dash series when I was doing that write up. I'm tempted.
Loved this! The wizards being a reflection of each other is so cool and the appendix n theming is really strong here. A big yes to CRYSTAL APES in more games please. Great stuff :)
Thank you so much!
Love the Perplexing Ruins art!
Hell yeah. That dude rocks!