I'm writing down notes as I play:

Main menu:

I adore the aesthetic of the game and already started feeling creeped out. The main menu is very clean and clear and the settings menu works really well which is nice. 

Gameplay:

• The art style is phenomenal and really fits the grim theme. The panels and text are done well - there is no disconnect between them.
• The music is so nice to listen to, and fits the vibe. I'm honestly impressed.
• This turned really dark! I love
• Story wise - I'm interested and the story somewhat reflects real life scenarios. 

Pause Menu:

The pause menu is so smart. It doesn't ruin immersion at all and it really gives the game personality. 

I was going to say make the game more interactive but after the first death its more interactive(the beginning is more like watching a movie or reading manga). I hope Jacksepticeye and Ducky dev play this as its very different to the other games here and really fun. Maybe this can be the next Doki Doki. Good luck with your gamedev journey, I will put your prequel game on my list of games to play.

I will give the game a rating in line with my experience.

Looks soo cool, kinda reminds me katana zero , me and my cousin are currently trying out different games, we'll def try this next
[EDIT]
We played it, there was something interesting happening where jumping made you go down more? then when you touch the ground you jump, made it very interesting (not sure if that was intended),  I had fun, I really like the vibes and I wish this was a windows build so I can play it offline.  Good job

I actually had fun hahaha. Here is my critique:

The environment is actually scary and the situation you're put in has so much potential. I always found ladders scary in games because u can't look around you. The bronns model is quite creepy I like it, but the bronn himself isn't actually scary due to a lack of animation and tension. The controls of the game are goofy lmao but it makes it fun and I had lots of those "OH SHIT IM GOING THE WRONG WAY" moments. I don't know if there are better alternatives for controls. 

The game has potential for sure, I have to give props for the uniqueness of the gameplay and  it actually works so good job. The game has a lack of polish but that's expected in a 5 day game jam especially since this is made by 1 person.  You should definitely be proud of the game.  I think it's just lacking theme wise as well, feels like you tried to force the theme into the game instead of revolving the game around the theme.

And lastly, I would make the controls more clearer (as in what u have to press). Right now u have to press the non highlighted mouse key which confused me.  All in all, I still had fun so that's a big plus because tbh I didn't think I'd play the game till the end when I first booted it up, but it kept me engaged.

Love the artstyle Checking it out now...

[Edit] Writing as I play:

- Wow this is so much fun + REALLY POLISHED WHATT!!!!

- Music is A+

- Love the theme integration

- "Blink: Does nothing" ahahah

- It's really polished

- wow it's polished

- It feels easy at first but it gets harder very quickly I think, l can see you tweaking this in the future. However with the limited time that u had this is really cool

- The rocks break when they land leaving a small rock to bounce, I got confused it it could hit me and actually died trying to avoid it, only to discover it's only for visuals [EDIT] NEVERMIND IT HIT MEEEEEE!

Aight you're next, playing it now..

This sounds exactly in my boat. I used to be a big fan of Osu, Undertale and Beat sabers. Will play rn and give back feedback when I'm done, thank you for recommending it.

He looks like Muzan. Giving the game a go now

Writing when playing:

- For first game this is really cool... WOW!

- Would've loved to [Hold] to keep shooting instead of clicking constantly + Didn't know it used the mouse + Press [Space] to continue dialogue instead of [Enter] would've been better I think.

- Love the music, would've loved a slider to lower the volume a bit

- The game breaks on full screen, but I think it's not a big deal. 

- Still overall REALLY cool concept and the art for the boss is SO AWESOME

- Love the progression, however the lack of clarity for stuff like health and buttons makes it hard to understand.

- Dialogue is epic.

- Finished the game: Stood right next to him after I got the clear ability. Because bullet spawn is far enough that you could stand right next to him, overall I had fun playing this.

Writing as I play:

- Audio and artstyle are extremely cool

- I got soft locked on the tutorial level, I reached the right sight and pushed the box over the flower, so I was stuck

- Some controls were unclear, like [E] Felt like it would make me enter the door instead of switching characters.

- UI on top is not clear

- Loved the mechanics and the little animations for each one, overall this was so cool