Absolutely no worries! I saw a post on bluesky about it and thought I'd offer my game as I think this is for a really good cause :)
Thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it!! I definitely could have done a lot more with the game & system it's built off if I had more time - I was on a bit of a crunch to get it made for an upcoming event and I wanted to try and keep to the SRD and format (trifold leaflet) as much as I could. That said yeah, I largely agree with your comments and will keep them in mind when/if i return to this because there are certainly weak points in how I translated the mechanics.
As for the final resolution I made it an unlikely roll on purpose, which I acknowledge IS unfair XD I think I was going more for those ambiguous endings that are present in a lot of what acted as inspiration (Silent Hill, Everyone's Gone to the Rapture and The Forgotten City).
I 100% agree with you on being more descriptive - I was kinda pushing my luck making the town guide/prompts leaflet with my time constraints but I had wanted to do waaay more than what I could fit in the trifold haha! If I find the time i'd love to make another leaflet possibly covering some mysteries and adding more actions perhaps!
Many thanks again, I appreciate the time you took to look