Has a few wrinkles to iron out, but it's a pretty solid foundation for a horror game. I feel the usage of text to speech voices really pulled me out of the experience because of the stilted delivery, I think texts will do the job just fine. The other thing that needed adjusting is the FOV, it's really narrow and can cause nausea when traversing inside small spaces. Still, good job putting this all together in 10 days!

Good game. took a while to find the items. It's hard going down the stairs tho and yeah the walkie talkie loops is annoying.

Like Gruftsocke below, I played for a long time trying to find Tim. And others have mentioned the transparency issues with plants/webs etc. The walkie talkie loop gets really annoying, I would just do some seconds of soft static, then interspersed every once in a while with static Tim voice. Also, your sound attenuation goes into the second floor, I would lower the collider so you don't hear it upstairs. 

Having said all that, very ambitious! You got a whole story with cut scenes in on a very short schedule, congratulations! Would love to see it if you clean it up a bit!

I played your game up to “Save Tim,” after that I wasn’t sure what to do anymore.  

A few issues I noticed:

- Stair colliders prevent going down. The character basically slides down the stairs and glitches through the collider.  

- Alpha shader issues, clearly visible on the grass. I’ve also experienced this issue with transparency in WebGL builds. It comes from how Unity creates WebGL builds. Web and desktop builds have different build priorities. Unity strips out some shaders in WebGL builds, which is why alpha objects are only partially visible, solid, or not visible at all. However, there are solutions to fix the transparency issue.

The flashlight bothered me a bit because it runs out so quickly. There are also some missing UI elements, such as:

- flashlight status  

- objective tracking  

- small hint texts or narrator tips when the player hasn’t found anything for a while, to guide them back on track  

For the lighting objects themselves, I wouldn’t rely on emission mode alone. Instead, I would use a small sphere set to emission in the shader and place a point light at the light source to simulate the glow.

The graphics are perfectly fine for a jam project. Overall, I think it’s a very interesting title and a great piece of work

Interesting concept, I was looking very much for what to do. There was this sound eminating from the house somewhere in the right bottom and top corner, but getting there didn't reveal anything. The textures of the flowers around the house, looked like they weren't ready and there were some visual glitches. Also when you get into a van, normally you would go up a little to look more natural. Anyway, I spend about 20 minutes trying to find out what to do. I think it has potential, but maybe it needs better instructions.

I will post the exact timestamp later.

It starts as an interactive movie with narrative progression. Interesting.

As the others said, a little better onboarding would help - with a help page or a settings page with the controls. You give the hint "Press F" permanently so in the beginning I thought F was the Interaction key. It was just the flashlight. One of the annoying, flickering ones, only to be found in horror games. Reading the description outside of the game, I entered the house. Good use of cutscenes here.

By the way, you grass/flowers around the house looked like anti-tank obstacles, especially in the dark. I'm quite sure they are not as you intended. I did not find the breaker box either but I was nearly every room, even the attic. Quite effective spooky mood.

The well-lighted green equipment at the van (which has no inner colliders) misleaded me at the beginning to think that the main place of the game were there, and that I should do something with it. Just turn the light down there and a little up at the house, so you can lead the player better where she or he should go. ;-)

The gameplay loop is interesting, though a bit more polish on interaction feedback and pacing would make it even stronger. Some areas could use clearer direction for the player, but the core idea is memorable and has good horror potential if expanded further.

Great vibe! Was scary)
Just fix that irritating repeating sound that you can hear in every corner of the house :) 

I think the game has potential for a really atmospheric horror experience 😄

On my laptop it was very hard to see things in the distance though — maybe that was intentional — so I was pretty lost most of the time. Good thing there was a flashlight 😅

I wasn’t really sure where I was supposed to go. I played for a bit, managed to open some doors, and mostly kept hearing a distorted radio/static sound in the background.

But overall, I can definitely see the horror potential here 👍

An indicator of what to interact with, perhaps an "E" when hovering over objects, would be a great addition. Updating your Itch page with screenshots and a clearer description would also make the game much more appealing. Consider whether the flickering flashlight is truly necessary, as it might not add the benefit or feeling you intended. Finally, the FOV feels quite low, and I unfortunately could not find the breaker.

But the game delivers a nice horror mood, so good job on the hardest part :)

Not sure if I missed something obvious or not (it happens a lot), but can we go inside the house?

I'm not much into horror games (and this onel ooks like one), but you made an ambience and that's something. Maybe some music would be nice. But very nice in general lines

Cool game! I'm not a big fan of the voice acting though since its a bit unnatural. The game's premise is quite interesting and I do find myself getting spooked by the game! I love the vibes and just the premise overall though I wish there were more stronger ties into the theme. Overall, I still had a fun time! Great job!