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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Artwork | #83 | 4.641 | 4.641 |
| Narrative | #1536 | 3.231 | 3.231 |
| Creativity | #3203 | 3.538 | 3.538 |
| Audio | #3562 | 2.974 | 2.974 |
| Enjoyment | #5700 | 2.692 | 2.692 |
Ranked from 39 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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You're playing with the Devil, but be careful... don't let your heart or card countdown hit 0...
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LaJuj
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I liked the game idea, but I found the detection zone of the cards unclear.. Also, having the tutorial repeating itself everytime you die is a bit clumsy.. The artwork though, is absolutely breathtaking !!! The characters are gorgeous, drawn in a truly skilful way and the shaders embellish them. Huge admiration from me !!
Thanks a lot !! Yeah a lot of improvement to be done but i'll try to fix that in upcoming updates!
Happy to read that this game is going to continue evolving ! I bookmarked it to see how it is going to grow !!
Great game with a clever and lovely concept. Overall the game is great I will give 5/5 in each. Keep it up! and if you have spare time please check out my game too.. :)
Thanks a lot, I'll makz sure to do it tommorow !
GREAT artwork.
It took me way too long to realize I had to hit the damage card with the red cursor! I don't see that written anywhere, but maybe I missed it? I think it would be simpler if you just had one cursor that can trigger the cards.
I also think it's frustrating to have 8-9 cards left and get dodges all in a row...even when I got the hang of it, there was nothing I could do to beat the tutorial enemy.
I also made a rhythm game so I feel some of your pain and ran into some of the same design problems, hah. Rhythm games are hard to make! I sympathize.
Thanks! Yes rythm game are a pain in tha ***. I'll check your when I get home !Thanks for the feedbacks!
Hey from discord:)
OMGGG a rythm game niice!
I really liked the gameplay, but yeah ill say the same thing as everyone about the hit boxes, they are a bit confusing especially the "dodge" ones
but OMG the ARTTTTT i wish i could make game art like this one day bc this is GORGEOUS
Haha thank you, yeah will fix this!! And for the art I'm sure you'll be able to do it !!
I absolutely love the art here! Amazing job I aspire to be such a great artist like you. Thank you for being an inspiration.
Simple but understandable story.
The card hitbox was confusing. I hit it but got a miss.
I bought a thing from the store and got a game over? I don't understand
The intro and tutorial start again after failing, I suggest adding the option to skip at least or throw the player into the gameplay ASAP.
Good job!
Hey thanks a lot for the kind words you don't know how much that means to me! That aside I agree that the game need a lot more work, but it's planned and a full release version will be made with a friend musician of mine, so I keep your comment warm till I can fix that! I just checked your games and I only have to say that you don't need to aspire as being a "great artist like me" hahaha, you're already doing an amazing job!!!! Anyway if you want to follow the progress on the full release you can follow me at lajuj.exe on instagram I post a lot of develog there! Don't hesitate to send me a message I could send you a advanced version for feedbacks if you aree interested !
I'll follow you here because I don't use instagram :/ I have bsky and twitter tho!
More people need to be checking out this game just based on the art itself! When I got in and was playing I couldn't help but fall in love with the presentation! That being said I was a really let down with everything else. I know everyone is already mentioning things like hitboxes on cards, upgrades costing health, etc and what not so I won't rehash everything. I wish you got more time to fully realize everything because I can tell you have something super amazing on your hands!
And I dont wanna backseat dev since I know you wanted to implement so much more but I cant help but think about so many cool ideas like bosses that mess with the timing or change the order you resolve cards. I hope to see you continue working on this and if not hope to see more from you!
Hey thanks a lot for all those feedbacks ! There is no harm at all its great to have positive feedbacks, I'm still hesitating on continuing the projects so maybe one of those day you could see a full release! If you want to follow what I'm woking on I'm posting dev vlogs on instagram and I'm planing on doing some reels on the jam, my name is lajuj.exe there. Thanks a lot for the kind words on the art though !