it looks very artsy but i cant read shit

I could hear screechy static in my ears while reading this. The layout, fonts, colors, and graphics scream 90s horror video game and the descriptions reinforce that. It's all so gruesome. Excellent work.

An onslaught of nostalgia and heavy metal vibes, love it! Packed with ideas, this will be fun to play. The visiual design is great, even though the module may be hard to read in print out. 

Love the PSX nostalgic layout, but the font makes it really tough to read. Please, consider adding a clean, printer-friendly version. Mechanically, a few things feel off (if i read correctly): the high enemy armor stats (10–14) make foes feel extremely tough, environmental hazards like scorching heat lack concrete rules, and the Meatgrinder's instant death feels way too punishing. 

Awesome concept, I felt like dragged inside I have no mouth and i must scream, but imho it needs some mechanical tuning and  legibility.

The text reads like heavy metal lyrics. I've never read something described as "a structure of scab-smeared metal" and I'm totally invested from the jump. The adventure has an excellent blend of science fiction and fantasy inspirations. This is an absolute standout for writing quality of the entries I've reviewed so far. 

On the visual side, the font choice and bolded white on black background do make it a little bit tough to read, but I think the bonus to the visual presentation is well worth the tradeoff. However, I do think some people just plain might not be able to read it if they have any visual processing issues, so it might be a good idea to make a reader/printer friendly version as a backup downloadable for those folks. 

I absolutely will be taking a look at your other work. 

Layout is gorgeous and evocative, but hard to read. 

Incredible atmosphere, love the graphics, the nostalgia is off the charts!  Takes me back to the early 90s.

Very atmospheric, very unsettling, great execution! I really want to play this one!