Nice to see something fresh like Daggerheart, and the premise and structure of this adventure seems great, as well as the dual-countdown chase mechanic that create a cool twist. 

I have found a few small areas that could make it smoother, but I never wrote an adventure for D.H. before so I may be wrong, sorry in case.  While the Owl King has full stats, the Knights themselves don't have any. I suppose you can find them in the manual but including basic stats would save GM prep time. Also I didn't understand at which value the 1d20 and 1d12 clocks start (at their maximum value? or they are rolled for a variable head start?)

I like the content, I like the cover art used, I like that there’s finally a Daggerheart entry to be found. I love the ever-circling questioning of the players to build the world together.

I typed: “Do the KotBB have any motivation to kill the Owl King?” and then realized that that’s one of the questions asked at the very beginning. So good :)

I love how the overall module theme is very fantasy coded and it reminds me a magical place in a fable universe in a far far future. I also like how each place is quite evocative and help the player imagine the world and creating the world together in the table. I'm not sure of the Owl King HP being so low, but he has unique features that could aid the players! really interesting module and I could see running this for new players who wanted to get into Daggerheart.

I like this lot. The theme is very on-point and the visual design is headed in the right direction to maximize at-table usefulness. Great use of public domain art too (I'm a fellow enthusiast). I think the font choices and formatting are a little bit muddled though. They don't quite work together to create a harmonious visual hierarchy.  I would suggest pairing back a bit on the total number of fonts and font sizes to try and improve that.

This feels like a very good campaign starter. The open world building questions for the whole table look like a great way to establish the setting. The cover art is very evocative and the general design is pretty good, but the lines dividing the sections and the small caps font are a bit “too clean” compared to the rest.

Really loved the the collaborative worldbuilding questions; these days I've been really into adventures and systems that hand over traditionally GM roles to the players. Great layout and art, too!

Very cohesive design and thematic art direct. Seems easy to read and would be useable at the table.

Very nice design and themed well.