Thank you very much for the detailed review!
I am so glad people are seeing the Sword & Planet side. I tried not to be too obvious, but it's definitely something I was aiming for.
As for the descriptions, I have to admit this is my first time working with such a constrained format, and it was not easy for me to balance the flavour, meta information, and actual mechanical stuff. Also with system-agnostic stuff, I have to find the balance between providing enough information while still keeping it loose enough for anyone to adapt it to their preferred systems.
Your points are noted and I will keep them in mind when I start working on the second part.
Let me know if you ran it, I'd love to hear about it!