This was marvelous! I loved the inclusion of the dice roll and the fact that there was character creation (and pretty robust, too! I know I relied heavily on Giuseppe's Charm boost) in this short time was incredible. The story was rich, surprising, and creative. I also loved the notepad feature and that there was a separate section for dreams; it made navigating my various thoughts much easier. I felt clever while playing, and that's so important in a mystery game... The dream analysis section, while super clever from an Inky perspective, was a liiiittle simpler and less deduce-y than I normally prefer, and I do wish there had been some audio in a game themed like this, especially at the end, but my imagination filled in the blanks!
I'm really excited to see your other stuff, both previously (as mentioned in the intro) and in future!