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Very nice! Love the accordion as an instrument in here as well as the clock, especially at the speed up after the intro. And I am utterly in love with the pitching of the bell/gong sounds at the end.

My nitpicks: If possible, I would move the two accordion lines further apart or remove one octave of the doubled notes from each, as soon as both are playing. Right now, there is significant overlap in the spectrum and especially starting at bar 89, when the orchestra track is also kicking in, those two arpeggio lines try to talk over each other, making the arrangement mushy and the individual voices difficult to differentiate. And while I get the cuckoo as a clock element, its presence feels somewhat exaggerated. If it were a more background element and maybe also introduced earlier, I think it might work better in this piece - as it is, it feels like a comic relief in a track that does not need one.

I agree with you on the two points, especially about the arrangement at the end. Thanks for commenting!

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And because I'm German and we don't intuitively apply the praise sandwich: Please don't read my nitpicks as me being unhappy with your creation - after careful, critical listening, I could come up with only two things I would change (one of which being 100% based on personal taste). Your piece is great and you better be proud of it! You might run into the awkward situation that you are the host of the jam and among the highest ranked participants =D