This was awesome! The art is so beautiful and exactly matches the story's atmosphere; it's all so cohesive. The sudden switch to playing as the princess really surprised me in a good way! I though I'd scuffed my run by dying as the knight :D and the dragon?? Beautiful!
I did feel that the dragon's dialogue did feel a little out of place at times - with everyone else being incredibly verbose, having her use more modern/shorter language did feel a little strange. However, this is a tiny gripe in an otherwise solid visual novel, and you should be very proud!!