I love the idea of the spirits in this one! Neat way to put in some puzzle challenges. Very fairytale and suits the spirit of Fatherfog.
- "They are the one whp perishes" -> "who"
- Coyotte > Coyote
- I like the villagers mechanic, but I think it could use some development for relevance and clarity.
- The Guide's Section says the Coyote is detrimental, but besides a bad smell, how?
- Locations not being in presentation order is a little jarring.
- I would need a description of the Flame Guardians and what they're up to at the top of the mountain. Players can't really be expected to come up with a plan if a situation isn't presented.
- Fleshing out the spirit encounters would be welcome too - you have room for it!