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A jam submission

Hole In The WallView project page

Hole into a new world
Submitted by Bean — 1 day, 15 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Use of Colors#543.4883.488
Theme#613.4883.488
Overall#842.9532.953

Ranked from 43 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your art incorporate the theme?
Fantasy world through a hole in the basement wall

Would you like to receive constructive criticism/advice in the comments?

Yes

Type

Still

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Comments

Submitted(+2)

The sky has too much noise, it could have benefited from having a smoother gradient instead of the texture you applied. The sword hilt also needs more contrast, it gets lost in the sky.

The bricks turned out pretty cool though! I think the teal is a bit too bright and pulls too much focus away from the sword

Developer

Thankyou for the critique! I honestly have no idea what I’m doing, and don’t know any techniques to make it better. I’m not an artist and this is my first standalone piece based off the very few videos I’ve seen. :D 

Submitted(+1)

I mean, for being "not an artist" and this being your first piece, it's actually not bad. Sometimes you learn with experience.

Submitted(+1)

it has a very soft feeling to it

Submitted(+1)

Zelda 2 vibes