Well... I didn't expect the fog to be such a beautiful, eloquent metaphor for both my memory issues AND my bipolar disorder 😭 Page 13 hit me HARD... It's really weird, my room suddenly got super dusty and my eyes got watery right around then. Funky coincidence :D The dust didn't go away for quite a while, either...
There is just... an absolutely remarkable blend of humor, insight, emotion, poignancy, and cleverness here. I am in love with this game. Not that I love it lol, I am in love with it. I turned each page with an awe and joy I didn't even know I was capable of. It inspires me to want to make something like it. In fact, I have in a way: my "big game", Oceans and Spirals, also has you in a void that's mysterious, empty, and dark, too. But it focuses on the loneliness and hopelessness, the darkness, inspired by its video game source (Alan Wake 2). This is like... you took my mania, my hope, my love of life and others, and my depression, threw em in a blender, and served them on a fancy plate.
I was also super surprised by the part where only you or the companion can be FILLED by a meal. Goodness, the idea of either helping someone else or yourself is such a relatable thing. Another surprising part where the dust got me.
This game needs to be edited. There are typos and such. That's gonna happen when you do SUCH a fantastic job making a SIXTY-ONE PAGE DOCUMENT in 72 hours. But, goodness, I literally ache for you to finish this. I beg you to make this game hackable or make an SRD for it. I hope for a day when you run a jam using this system. I already have several ideas of games I want to make with it, including a few I've been itching to make for a while but had no system for.
It is ASTONISHING that this could be created in 72 hours. It is one of my favorite games I've read in a long time, and I've found some really incredible stuff (including some of the entries in this jam!)
- ✨Beth







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