I loved the POV switch! We got a good amount of time to get to know both the princess and the knight, and the dragon’s candy-coated venom made my skin crawl in all the right ways. The QTEs were fun, too; they kept me on my toes the whole time!
gorgeous art with wonderful writing and characters! i loved the switch up of POV and the little hints to who the princess you were rescuing actually was <3
This was awesome! The art is so beautiful and exactly matches the story's atmosphere; it's all so cohesive. The sudden switch to playing as the princess really surprised me in a good way! I though I'd scuffed my run by dying as the knight :D and the dragon?? Beautiful!
I did feel that the dragon's dialogue did feel a little out of place at times - with everyone else being incredibly verbose, having her use more modern/shorter language did feel a little strange. However, this is a tiny gripe in an otherwise solid visual novel, and you should be very proud!!
The writing is so luscious and the art is so atmospheric I'm in LOVEEEE. Incredible job! After finishing the game I really loved the beautiful prose in the writing, you could feel the desolation and the frigidness of the world. The dragon was also so GORJUS, albeit toxic LOL I gagged when I saw the overlapping images with the textbox that was so incredibly neat and unlike anything I've seen before, it was so creative.
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I loved the POV switch! We got a good amount of time to get to know both the princess and the knight, and the dragon’s candy-coated venom made my skin crawl in all the right ways. The QTEs were fun, too; they kept me on my toes the whole time!
Thank you so much for your feedback, I'm so glad you enjoyed our work!!!
gorgeous art with wonderful writing and characters! i loved the switch up of POV and the little hints to who the princess you were rescuing actually was <3
Aaa yay, my little foreshadowing bits, I'm so glad they worked!! Thank you for your comment <3
This was awesome! The art is so beautiful and exactly matches the story's atmosphere; it's all so cohesive. The sudden switch to playing as the princess really surprised me in a good way! I though I'd scuffed my run by dying as the knight :D and the dragon?? Beautiful!
I did feel that the dragon's dialogue did feel a little out of place at times - with everyone else being incredibly verbose, having her use more modern/shorter language did feel a little strange. However, this is a tiny gripe in an otherwise solid visual novel, and you should be very proud!!
Your kind words mean so much ;w; !!! And thank you for the feedback, that's good to know for future writing!!
The writing is so luscious and the art is so atmospheric I'm in LOVEEEE. Incredible job! After finishing the game I really loved the beautiful prose in the writing, you could feel the desolation and the frigidness of the world. The dragon was also so GORJUS, albeit toxic LOL I gagged when I saw the overlapping images with the textbox that was so incredibly neat and unlike anything I've seen before, it was so creative.
Thank you so much on every account!! We're both SO delighted by your words!!!