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How does your art incorporate the theme?
I added an ominous dragon perched on the peak against the sunset
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Love the dark colors you chose, but because you used the same blues on the dragon as the mountain, the dragon is basically invisible. Having it be part of “the darkness” so to speak is a cool idea but for this particular piece, maybe even adding an additional highlight color for the scales to draw out the general shape of the dragon a little bit would have helped.
i don't think the dragon stands out too much against the peak
I really like the sunset it makes the art look really aesthetic, however I am not sure if the colors on the dragon are the best you could have chosen, it makes the dragon blend in the peak and makes the dragon be not well identifiable, where the dragon ends and the peak begins.
It can work if you are going for making the dragon be an eldrich horror monster, or just the dragon being camouflaged and the peak being it's home, however I think it would be better if you focused more on the dragon.
While the lack of good view of the dragon adds to them being ominous, it also makes the sky feel like the center point of the art, it's not bad and it works well here, it's just that I would have liked to see more of the dragon.
Sorry if that was long, I really do enjoy the art and think it is great, I just think there is some parts that can be better.
Thanks for the feedback!