nice framing, I like it! and while the trees look pretty nice, they do stand out from the rest of the piece with how many colors shades they have, I think you would have to give the same treatment to the rest of the piece if you want it to work, but that's its own beast lol or you could simplify the trees themselve
I'd also recommend trying to use less shades whenever possible, like with the clouds. I feel like you could've achieved a better result with 3 or so shades instead of 6 if used properly
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I do agree with you! I went a little overboard with the trees for sure, and they steal quite a lot of attention! (I will for sure be keeping in mind to be more careful about my detail placement, in the future)
I can also agree with you on the clouds! The clouds were one of the things I personally didn't like how it turned out in the piece. I felt that the shapes were to rigid and didn't have that fluffiness and volume that a real cloud has. Though as I haven't (generally speaking) drawn a lot of clouds, I felt that it wasn't too bad.
That being said, I should for sure spend a lot more time practicing them and improving at it! And I agree that starting with 3 colors would be a good start!
Thank you for your kind words and for your critique! I really appreciate it! : )