Visions of Above has such a heartwarming vibe! I love your harmonic variety from the first to the second half, in which you return to the original melodic idea at the end with the piano. It ends a bit too abruptly, however, so try sustaining that note for a bit longer. The layering is quite ethereal and pretty overall. I like how you took some rhythms + melodic ideas and put them in a minor key with the battle theme. For the battle theme, I like the synthesizer harmonies, especially with the woodwind near the end. Also, maybe try amping up the percussion a bit, add a section that is a bit more intense, and maybe some chord changes to add more variety. These are just ideas, but if you want to lengthen the battle theme, then I think these can work. Banger track regardless. I love the soundfonts, as the textures are distinct, but no one element is overdoing it over the other (only the drums were a bit out of place; a bit too muffled and not enough of a punch to them, in my opinion). Great job!!
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Lunalum's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Composition | #58 | 3.714 | 3.714 |
| Impression | #68 | 3.643 | 3.643 |
| Overall | #99 | 3.314 | 3.314 |
| Storytelling | #105 | 3.143 | 3.143 |
| Creativity | #138 | 3.071 | 3.071 |
| Quality | #146 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
This is an electronic soundtrack, and is intended for a narrative action RPG. I used LMMS to create this.
Message from the artist
This is my first time participating in OST Composing Jam! I had lots of fun making music, and I look forward to seeing what everyone else cooked up.
Theme
Songs of a Forgotten World
How does it fit the theme?
This soundtrack is intended to convey part of a story of someone exploring a long-forgotten world.
Number of tracks2
Genre
Electronic
Synthwave/Retro
Soundtrack use permission
No




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