I could play it, and I liked the bright visuals! It's got a pretty cool style.
For the tutorial, the typing speed is a little slow, so it takes a bit for the words to all show up. It'd be cool if pressing Y once skipped the typing animation, and then pressing y again lets you go to the next part of the tutorial.
I didn't make it to the end of the game. I played twice, and timed out the first time, and died when opening a door the second time. I didn't end up seeing a monster or anything on the cameras.
Great job! I'm sure this was a lot of work!