Gorgeous Gorgeous Gorgeous map! Excellent art and very thematic. I did feel like there was a ton of jargon—I couldn't read two sentences without wanting to look for a reference to explain one of the terms or characters.
Viewing post in The Pillars of Creation jam comments
It wasn’t any one specific item, but with all the creature names that weren’t super obvious, the acronym (forget what for) and the engram scanner there was a lot of stuff that just wasn’t immediately clear what I was reading about. If it just wasn’t all those at once it wouldn’t have been noticeable but (this is hyperbole) it felt like every proper noun was something I needed to reference somewhere else.
I’m sounding more critical than I intend to be so take this with a grain of salt.